Story: The Song of Ximena Aljibe Part #1 . . . #WesternWednesday

Posted in Creative Endeavors, Western, Writing, fiction with tags , , , on October 29, 2009 by Hunter C. Coch

“Good evening fine folk of the south desert, and honest men of the tilled earth. As you know, one night a week we have our very special performer. You all know her. You all lust for her, in your secret dreams. To all our delights . . . welcome our desert queen . . . Ximena Aljibe.”

The screams and yells of welcome from the citizens of the Red Saloon was heard throughout the town, but when she entered the balcony, the people quieted. With her first step the piano began and in her third step down the tall stares she began the song. She sang and she weaved her way down the wooden steps. Each step was three beats of a heart, but to the eager audience, it seemed like ten-thousand.

She walked with confidence, but in her heart sat a stone. From her voice came her passions and songs of lust that burned in the obsessed; the crowded joint responded. In her dance was the dance of the succubus, movements brought radiance, but from around came dark desires seething with lust; one will pay later . . . so will she.

She jumped and sat on the edge of the fine oak bar, the crowds gathered around, lust filled their loins, desire in minds, and she sang to the power of melancholy delight, salacious sin, and delightful devilry. She knew the highest bidder wold take her. After the show gold would be her only delight, and she would swim in a yellow lake.

On the other side, leaning in a corner, only a reflection in the mirror from behind the bar, stood a man who did not lust. A dark man whose soul reflected pain like Ximena’s brought desire. He stared with eyes of grey steel, and for a moment, his stare made the angel voice quiver; but only the ears of the dark man heard; it made him smirk.

The song she sang continued and slowly the melody focused only on the dark stranger and he felt the sting of green eyes in the hearts of the mob. His face was stone and that stung her. In her inner most thoughts she was already in love, her conscious mind hoped he would pay this evening. Her eyes to his, and when love gets brought in, the walls will invariably fall. So dark man of the dusty planes stood like a pillar of salt, watching Ximena bring the audience to near climax . . .

Then stop.

The song of Ximena Aljibe had finished. She vanished to her room in the tobacco filled air, reading herself for the high bidder, desire against hope, for her dark man.

But them old devils are at it again; the dark man did not come, but the rancher Stevens stood at the door, his toothy and droopy smile and drool at his lips corner and glazed eyes leered.

Stevens tossed the gold too her feet.

For the first time, since her innocence was sold for the yellow metal, she cried. This angered the rancher. He fucked harder, but Ximena learned, long time past, to embrace the pain and let it fill her, listen to the hurting to drown out the cause.

The first thing she remembered, since going away, was the quiet night. Stevens was gone; left sometime in her delirium. She fixed her-self, scrubbing the filth away, removing the sickness outside. But the inner sickness was rising, and refusing to be submerged again. What had the dark man done to her. His steel eyes tore through her like hot lead through flesh.

And that’s when the shots came. From the street below her window they rang; uncountable blasts, with a scream of rage, sounding like the cumming of Stevens. She ran to the window and in her sight was the rancher, sprawled on the dusty street, above him was the dark man, his double colts smoking but still aimed at the fallen face.

And the dark man looked to Ximena Aljibe’s window, steel eyes a weapon. He looked down to dieing man, and fired the double rounds. From Stevens face rose crimson mist mixing with grey smoke.

Without looking, the one in the dark duster walk off, not a care for those that stood around. Not heeding the woman in the window.

#Haiku: Drifting . . . #WesternWednesday

Posted in Creative Endeavors, Haiku, Poetry, Western with tags , , on October 22, 2009 by Hunter C. Coch

On this great western Wednesday we start with a haiku, yes a western Haiku, get over it . . .

Drifting in the Sun
On dry lakes in high deserts,
The dust devils spin.

Another post soon: The Song of Ximena Aljibe

Tanka: Three Tanka of Forbidden Dreams Found

Posted in Creative Endeavors, Poetry, Tanka with tags , on October 18, 2009 by Hunter C. Coch

A Follow-up to: Three Tanka of Silent Sins

Forbidden dreams found,
Among the thunder of waves,
and the silent stars,
On a night that’s remembered
for the vices of the night.

How none remember,
but me, shining starlit eyes,
because none have seen,
the rebirth of joy and art,
In an old and lonely heart.

Fulfillment brings art,
Longing brings inspiration,
the drink brings chaos,
A theater dance Saturdays,
Eris, meet my mother Nyx.

Poem: This Devils Test (draft #1) . . . #WesternWednesday

Posted in Creative Endeavors, Poetry, Western with tags , on October 15, 2009 by Hunter C. Coch

This is a companion piece to the Poem, Six Bullets ’till Sundown.

I’m not 100% happy with the structer and flow of this one, but I’m tired and done for now. Enjoy

The dark man walked,
whistling melancholy tunes,
never talked,
looking for fortunes,
then in the wind cries, “Die!”

The desert was lonely with sage,
dust and windblown spires,
an improbable word of rage,
no ghost inspires,
sounded in the sky.

Colts set free,
pale eyes staring,
aching to spree,
and the heat blaring,
To the sight of emptiness.

He grinned,
and in the breeze,
on the lips of the hellish wind,
hands sought the ivory, itching to appease,
the lust in the lonesomeness.

The sky stretched blue,
with pillows of white,
and as the light grew,
so did the need to fight,
but the silence only stood on the sage spotted desert.

The dark man stands,
eyes in shadow,
hilts in hands,
feet in the meadow,
It came to hurt . . .

“Die! Son of a bitch!”
with silver knife,
and startled twitch,
and drops of red life,
fall slow.

Swinging with hungers rage,
his aged scalp gray,
dancing in the sage,
hunting to slay,
the dark man from below

Pale eyes held the motions,
skill sharpened his mind,
with calloused emotions,
waiting to repay in kind,
each slice of the knife.

Crimson splashed,
on the sagebrush,
the colors clashed
in his heated rush,
lusting for the dark mans life.

A moment came,
as he faced the west,
thunder without aim,
old man went to rest.

The dark man looked to the kill,
the kill with sights on the dealer,
“Son”, he said quiet and still,
“father”, spoke the dark revealer,
winning this devils test.

Away the dark man walked,
whistling melancholy tunes,
colts cocked,
heading to the deserts dunes,
Spirit of the desert sage.

Haiku: Tears

Posted in Creative Endeavors, Haiku, Poetry with tags , on October 9, 2009 by Hunter C. Coch

Tears long forgotten,
Dreams bring memories rebirth
On an autumn day.

Short Story: Pecos Bill: The Birth (Part #1) . . . #WesternWednesday

Posted in Creative Endeavors, Serials, Short Stories, Stories, Western with tags , , on October 8, 2009 by Hunter C. Coch

Pecos Bill: The Birth
Part #1

The story begins at his birth, the last of nineteen. The trail was hard and the desert wanted its toll. Mother screamed and cursed at the birthing pains, but  let out a smile as father came into the light. Father sat and mother leaned against him. She cried with resolution as father sent us away.

Father was a pillar of hope and strength, though the only help he could offer was support and compassion and a guiding hand bringing the tequila to her lips.

“I’m ready”‘ she said, tear falling.

The knife was pulled from his belt and placed mothers sweaty hand. Another drink to calm the pain and harden the spirit . . .

A deep slice from left to right, giving light to the unborn, and from the wound came Bill, on his own, just a smiling and laughing as the happiest child could possibly be.

Never was such a child seen.

“You are born to do great things Bill”, mother said while bleeding from the heroic wound. She held him and simply looked. Love and adoration filled her eyes. Mother then died.

Bill, sat in the comfort of the dead mothers arms, chewing fathers Bowie knife; and father sat with death and new life both looking for support. He weeped for joy and sorrow looking at the desert dawn.

Poem: Tanka: Whiskey . . . #WesternWednesday

Posted in Creative Endeavors, Poetry, Tanka with tags , on October 7, 2009 by Hunter C. Coch

Burning the parched throat,
eyes down to the golden drink,
regret speaks my heart,
for those left on trails behind,
hands given lead to the lost.

Haiku: Barren . . . #WesternWednesday

Posted in Creative Endeavors, Haiku, Poetry with tags , on October 7, 2009 by Hunter C. Coch

Sun dips in the dunes,
burning the high barren fields,
as I sit alone.

Haiku: Craving

Posted in Creative Endeavors, Haiku, Poetry with tags , on October 7, 2009 by Hunter C. Coch

Lust for the denied,
desiring murderers,
waiting for a thought.

Poem: Forget the Numbers (Part #3, draft #1) #westernwednesday

Posted in Creative Endeavors, Poetry, Western with tags , on October 1, 2009 by Hunter C. Coch

Time is short,
in the sunlit sky,
no hope for a dream,
looking high.

A western rumble,
to that my horse flew,
Me, the hanged man,
Delighting the devils crew.

But an easy death?
Denied that gift,
slow asphyxiation,
and the wind took a shift.

Through stars of suffocation,
Shots rang and bullets sang,
in my fading sight,
falling was the gang.

And though the sound of battle
brought a simple smile,
thoughts went to my wife,
lying in a pile.

The eyes close to see her beauty,
and join her company,
one wish only,
to avenge the villainy.

The rope snapped,
I fell,
the hate awakened,
to the litany of hell.

The bullets ended,
and sounds fade,
death has been dealt,
still a debt to be paid.

To the sound of walking feet,
came a creeping sleep,
despite the desire
to crumble and weep.

Despite the dead,
around the hanging tree,
a villain escaped,
to live and be free.